24.10.12

NaNo writers 2

So I was thinking about the book I am writing in the Nano writing month. and I thought I would share my ideas for it.   I have two different ones to pick from, the first is (You have to under stand I am writing prologues, or things that everything else can be based on):
This is my home. (OR) My home is in the land of fire and ice. The land is covered in ice but the volcanoes provide a lot of fire.  There are seven islands, with volcanoes on all of them. I lived on the biggest one, it has ten volcanos on it.  We lived in the catacombs, and got good at working with the fiery mountains that we lived on.  And very good at using fire and metal.  The first thing I remember wanting to do was to be able to fight like my dad, I was close to my dad after all my mom had died when I was born so I was the only thing he had left, we had no family.  Then the second thing was to wonder the islands, I would do that when I was much older (My dad hated me out of his site for more than a hour at most he had let me out for three hour that was all he could do.), third and I wanted to meet the dragons that roamed the outer islands the ones that had fewer volcanoes that we could not live on.  He did teach me to fight like him, as soon as I could walk he  gave me a dagger and taught me to handle it and swing it like a sword.  And as I got older I could watch the men in the catacombs fight and learn how they win and lose so that it would never happen to me.

Second:

  1. Prologue:  He raced through the woods.  ‘Traitor!! Traitor!!’   Ran through his mind.  “What.....have....I....DONE???”  He SCREAMED.  His name was Joseph, Joseph was a tall thin man, with flaming red hair and dark brown eyes and skin that looked like he had been every day of his life out in the sun.  He had been one of the few young men that had been chosen by the king's right hand man to be trained to guard the king and his household he had been one of the best of them he had been set to guard the King’s only child, a young girl of 13, named Sylvia who had been small and sickly all her life.  But someone had drugged him the first night on duty when he awoke a couple hours later she was gone out of shock he had ran into the night. He would find her no matter what happened he would take her back to her father one day. one day  Chapter one:  Two days later Princess Sylvia or Sidar as she was getting called now, lay on her back looking at the trees swaying over her.  Then she heard the men coming back, not that they had all gone, no some of them had hidden in the trees nearby.  It had been a very trying night because they had come into her room and told her that ‘Men were attacking the castle and they had sent men to get the King and Queen out of their but they were going to save her first.’  Now they had gone hunting leaving her to sleep with some guards around her so she could sleep in safety without anything hurting her.  They also said that they would bring her news when they got back of her family when they came back.  Now she heard them coming back she guested that there was 50 or more of the men around here her.  What did they really want she wandered.  She got up to meet them.  She had started to take to the wild life of sleeping when you like and doing what you liked and always getting up early and eating meat and water.  They walked in the glade dejected. “What’s wrong?” She asked.  The leader came ford. “Your mother and father are dead.  They were stabbed to death in their beds. We did not reach them in time, we checked your bedroom it was turned upside down, obviously they were looking for you..........Little one.”  She stumbled back she had never been very close to her father and mother after all they had a kingdom to rule and she had to be taught how to do it when they were gone, but still they were her parents and they had just been murdered in their bed while they were asleep.  She let her face fall into her hands and she cried.  She didn’t know how much time went by before she heard ______’s voice of the captain of the men that had saved her.  “Please little one, you have to eat to or you will starve.”  “But I don’t feel like eating or living.”  He smile knowing that is what’s she would say.  “But what would your father do?”  She had never been close to them but she still know what he would have said.  “He would live for the Kingdom.  But I have never meet the people.”  His smiled widened.  “You have meet them now.”




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